How'd Castie's story with Vizin sound?

The Planet Eater (30 pages)

  • Project – Screenplay: Castie
Cover

The cover ugly and completely indifferent. Regardless of the content of central history. Too bad. 4/10

Summary

Scrooge blackmails Donald to bring Phantom Duck, to the millionaire club to meet Donna Carmen and close a very profitable deal with her. What's Donald going to do (where's Phantom) and he's got to be at work and a club at the same time?

History

This story by Castie is better than what we read in Issue #154. But he still doesn't touch his very good stories. For starters, the plan is very nice. What we're used to seeing from the creator. On the other hand, the script somewhere didn't do me right. He lost and had nothing terrible like in other stories of the creator that we have read in the COMIX of the Second Period but also in Mickey Mouse of the First Period.

Let's say he had green messages and I liked that. Of course, he didn't get along as well as in the amazing story. The Big Brother’s World. The journey into space and generally the trust the aliens showed became very fast. Or the point where Bijin is "injured" and getting evidence of its origin is a bit invalid. Couldn't the aliens have found him before? The most beautiful twist was the truest function/target of Bzin. I liked that enough and it was smart.

Other Stories

Of the other stories, the only one I liked enough in the design, but more smugly was The second chance. The script was something fresh and Donald showed us, no matter what. I was glad the unfortunate duck had a touch of joy but I was sad when in the end it almost all happened like before. THE Artibani It gives us once again a wonderful script. 7,5/10

Summary

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That's a wonderful plan of Casty's story, but the script is weak in some places. Very nice of the accompanying stories was Artibani's!
That's a wonderful plan of Casty's story, but the script is weak in some places. Very nice of the accompanying stories was Artibani's!
8/10
Total Score